Hip-Hop/Rap Feedback and Opinions Part II

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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 2:32pm #21198

IndianaBasketball
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More feedback and opinions needed, regardless of negative or positive!
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 2:50pm #391376

Malik-Universal
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the first two are not bad, there alrite.. but the last two i dont like at all… the intro in the second song is dumb… to many metaphors… the songs r not very original, the lryics arent bad, but they need tweaking
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 2:50pm #391398

Malik-Universal
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the first two are not bad, there alrite.. but the last two i dont like at all… the intro in the second song is dumb… to many metaphors… the songs r not very original, the lryics arent bad, but they need tweaking
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 2:51pm #391382

Malik-Universal
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the potential is defintely there… how old r these guys anyway
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 2:51pm #391405

Malik-Universal
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the potential is defintely there… how old r these guys anyway
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 6:12pm #391523

sheltwon3
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 6:12pm #391544

sheltwon3
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 6:13pm #391525

sheltwon3
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Check this out this is my homie rapping on this beat with some lady singing hook though
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 6:13pm #391546

sheltwon3
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Check this out this is my homie rapping on this beat with some lady singing hook though
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 6:13pm #391527

sheltwon3
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He made a song about the Miami Heat kinda and will have it up soon
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Posted on: Tue, 08/31/2010 - 6:13pm #391547

sheltwon3
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He made a song about the Miami Heat kinda and will have it up soon
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Posted on: Wed, 09/01/2010 - 1:32am #391658

Sup
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Your mom makes it rain? Nah.
Anyway…that “tell me how I lean” though is a cool flow on the hook…quite frankly y’all are a lot better when you guys aren’t tryna sound like Drake/lilwayne…also you are a year late with the autotune.
Constructivly speaking though, you guys should help each other write. Cause one of you is more lyrically deficient and the other lacks a commercial flow.
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Posted on: Wed, 09/01/2010 - 1:32am #391677

Sup
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Your mom makes it rain? Nah.
Anyway…that “tell me how I lean” though is a cool flow on the hook…quite frankly y’all are a lot better when you guys aren’t tryna sound like Drake/lilwayne…also you are a year late with the autotune.
Constructivly speaking though, you guys should help each other write. Cause one of you is more lyrically deficient and the other lacks a commercial flow.
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Posted on: Wed, 09/01/2010 - 2:51am #391686

Malik-Universal
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exactly sup…. this may sound wierd but try to write the lyrics not to a beat first…make em sing accapella first…. then the way they flow with the lryics, pick out the write beat.. cuz i think these guys can be a lot better lyricaly, and sometimes i think hearing a beat first can alter how the lryics r writ imo
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Posted on: Wed, 09/01/2010 - 2:51am #391705

Malik-Universal
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exactly sup…. this may sound wierd but try to write the lyrics not to a beat first…make em sing accapella first…. then the way they flow with the lryics, pick out the write beat.. cuz i think these guys can be a lot better lyricaly, and sometimes i think hearing a beat first can alter how the lryics r writ imo
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