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All those hoop heads.......

http://www.innoutnba.com/2010/03/nba-free-agents-2010.html

this is my first article of this website. can you guys tell me if you hate it or love it, anything to make me a better writer.


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Love the article but hate

Love the article but hate the intro to the podcast that keeps playing. I keep thinking Zoolander is playing in the background. lol

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thanks

thanks man, i know its the owner of the websites voice. thank you for checking it out, I will be writing every other day. So if you like my writing, ill keep you updated.

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Yeah man, I liked the

Yeah man, I liked the article, Wade and Amare in Chicago would be sweet, good job.

I did have to hit the pause button on the guy talking though. His voice just aggravates me, sorry.

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I liked it, it gave the most

I liked it, it gave the most realistic options for all the players. Their are however some names you left off the list, maybe do a follow up of the next 10 players?

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i understand...

about the voice thing. I will talk to him and see what we can do for you guys. I would like to do the next 10 because there are some people I did leave off, for example T-Mac, Nate, and a couple others, but its hard to do because I am being assigned things to write, my next topic is on my person top 5 players to ever play the game.

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